In love with my stepdad: Forbidden desires unleased - Reviews

I dont think this book has been completed

Maria is just too greedy for my liking. I am Team April.

A good rebirth + MMORPG story, I like the way the world in the game is described but nothing much is said about the real world except in the earlier chapters. Good mind candy till about chapter 900 when the writer adds a switching between timelines switch and quality drops. The writer starts forgetting things and things get confused and meaningless. Oddly enough the translation stops 2 chapters before end of story, why? I read the last 2 chapters in Chinese as well as the author notes in which the author apologizes for drop in quality and abrupt end, seems it was to hard to combine writing with his new job. Too bad really, but especially the first 600 chapters are a nice read.

.......................................................................................................there are some mistakes but the story is nice, please update more.........................................................................................................

Great story with great potentiel.It gave me Naruto vibes ( the conflict between Madara and Hashirama )I wish you all the luck ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤???

I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation.It is relatable and wonderful plot!!

The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision

30 (2002/07/28)

Ms Chae always picks out clothes for him whenever he is going out but, since she died and his girlfriend left him he continued to wear that hood .He didn't know what to wear. "knock, knock, boss are you coming "?.  "Do you mind helping helping me with my clothes, if you don't want to you can... I learnt you were interested in fashion " . "I will be pleased " she went over and helped him, she was so happy. When they arrived everyone was like what is he wearing, isn't too much for this gathering. Ms Jang didn't feel bad because she chose it from her heart and that was also an opportunity . He wanted to sit far from them because he thought they felt uncomfortable around him but they didn't agree with what he was about to do, so they brought him closer to them. They were about to start eating when Mr Kang's  team came in with him. "you are here, huh what's with that outfit " . It was a nice outfit after all, just that they are not used to seeing him dress up. Hwangi came with a camera, but when they brought their phone to take pictures he didn't know what to do ,so he kept it. Soo Ha wanted to take a picture of Ro Woon but she screwed up her face making her face look funny, everyone laughed at it, when it's the boss's turn, it was pushing him to laugh but he held it back . Too bad he doesn't laugh anyhow so, they were disappointed they could have seen him laugh for the first time . They showed it to Mr Kang, she rushed over to stop him from seeing it but it's too late, he laughed until his stomach hurts. "boss, smile " chakam they took pictures and went to play games together except him.

Thor shouted "Nooooooooo" clearly in grief while Odin once again said"No." not affected much.

"Like I promised, will you marry me?" He said weakly, "When I am better?"

Hippolyta finally remembered that she has a guest and turned towards them when she notice that the man was nowhere to be seen. [Lady Mikaela, Where is your Mate?] Hippolyta ask and Mikaela replied with [Oh...he's just itching for some fight so he flown towards the prison to challenge Ares in a battle]