In Another World As A Slime - Reviews

Stupid harem novels get translated without delay whereas good novels such as this one is not getting translated in English... Good Work.....

well, I haven't read it but the tag is NTR so Nah it's not my cup of tea. But still, I'll give you 5 stars and if you ask why? Cause I am in a good mood...well, kidding, just treat it as compensation. I will shamelessly promote my novel here.Just search, His Eternal Aspiration. It's cultivation and r-18 and much more (I mean plot-wise.) You will surely enjoy the story and its characters. Though for now, only 20 chaps are out. (vol 1 is complete.):Dand author if you don't like this then just delete this review. But I already gave ya 5 stars~Btw I would like to salute you for writing 200+ chaps even after getting so many bad reviews.

the worst kind of chinese trash I've ever read. 13 chapters in and NOTHING makes any sense. mc is a max level 80 character, but he can apparently be instantly killed in one hit by a level 5 boss. even though in every rpg ever made levels make a huge difference and his sheer stats as a level 80 should allow him to one punch the boss. furthermore hes playing vr like what we have in real life right now, not actual full diver virtual reality. yet hes able to do things and regularly talks about tastes and sounds and feelings you could only experience in a full dive virtual reality. author uses this as a way to introduce his female landlord who demands his 3 months overdue rent, and just comes into his room while hes playing the game and shes impressed and thinks he's like "an awakened lion" because of his perfect control of his character as he slowly whittles the boss to death with his ranged attack and staff that come out of nowhere.... this story has more plot-holes in the first 13 chapters then all of the top 10 stories on this site combined in their entirety.

If it's his book, I'm gonna certainly read it because I love his style. This author is so superb and he's got talent. This book is gonna be great just like his other works. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters of the book.

I like this novel. The sincerity shown by the author by speaking freely,has added a dash of permanence to the novel. The story development is fluid. Although MC is an omnipotent guy,still the struggle shown by him,the emotions,the sincerity - it all make this nove a refreshing one and hard to put down.

This young man chooses weather!!!!!!!!!                                                                                                   

JAYDENS DREAM POV   

      I couldn't even believe we talked of getting married when i was only 16. How desperate for love I must have been. How much I wanted to feel the warmth of another on my skin. To place a kiss on his sweet lips, our tongues interlocking, with me caressing his hair as much as I wanted to with no one to stop me. How much I had imagined what would happen between us.

Only shooting stars

Thor's mighty battle cry could be heard for miles. Soaring in at top speed, the God of Thunder swung Mjolnir with all his might.

I write this review after reading 268chapters.At first, I thought this book would have a great future. But as we started nearing this future, I was left disappointed .First,here are the pros : - The author is devoted and constantly improving his writing skills.- The updates are quite regulars .- There's little to no info dumps, and everything is slowly introduced and explained.- The plot isintriguing .- The pace is nor quick nor slow.-There's some comedy.Then, the cons :- The characters are too shallow.There are so many chapters, yet it feels like we don't know enough about the characters. First, the MC. Alan is honestly sooooo annoying.Each time an important thing happens to him, it feels like he will grow as a person. However it's only that. A "feeling" . He is still that mentally weak person whom everyone brags about the potential but that we don't see acting as he should when the situation is dire. The case Ezra Fornum; thefight with the orc( if I remember correctly),were all occasions for him to grow more powerful; both physically and mentally. Yet, it didn't happen.Plus , he is always complainingabout his weakness, which makes hisinexistent progress even more annoying.Also , the mc isn't even a villain until now.(Ps: He is also not smart nor stupid, which some might not like.)Second , the fl . Sabrina's relationship with the Mc is so suprlerficial. Yet the author TELLS us that "they're SO in love! They just do not want to be together for now."Apart from the shallowness of theirrelationship, Sabrina herself feels 2D. Sure,we know about her background. But the fact is that we don't really know her aside from this. What is her goal in life ? What does she like ?What are her pet-peeves?lt feels likeshe's not really a person.And this appliesto every other characters of the book. - The author gave a too powerful cheat to the Mc.The ice dragon breathing technique ( if I remember well) made him go from E rank to C- rank at the first try . So if the technique is so powerful and the Mc wants to be strong, isn't using it( descretly) enough for him to attain his objectives ?There have been so many traumatizing events that him not using the technique sooner doesn't make sense.Moreover , recently( chapter 260 or   ), he used it again and only got up to C- rank; which makes it SO obvious that the author is attempting to nerf the Mc. - The feelings are clumsily expressed .I honestly feel so tired of reading paragraphs of Alan rambling about his pain and burden. But if they are not exagerated, the emotions aren't palpable.This all  mostly stems from the lackof description of the thing that provokesthese emotions and its possible impactson the Mc or his loved ones.For example, If a character is afraid of something, you can describe the thing accordingly from his/ her perspective . But describing it is not enough.One should also show the impacts of the said thing so the reader, too, genuinely feels how imperative it is for the Mc to win against it.-Last but not least , what are the Mc's goals?It is understandable that Alan is perturbed by the fact that he is only a sort of 'fake Alan Peccator '. However , his confusion shouldn't be stretched out for 100 chapters as it hasbeen the case since now.It seems that rather than thinking pragmatically , the Mc is evolving in his world and waiting for answers, which will not come if he stays as static as he is . All in all, this bookfailed my expectations. Nonetheless, I wish all the best to the author and pray for his improvement .

Honestly there are much worse novels in higher positions.It's perfect? no, some things about the protagonist, especially at the beginning, made me want to strangle him, however the writing and the sense of the world were noticeably improving, thanks also to a basis that, if it's true, didn't invent anything new, and it's also true that it didn't it lacked everything it needed to have a lot of potential.I hope the author doesn't let himself be demoralized by idiots who comment without even reading the work itself. At least this is what I seem to have perceived.The material is good and honestly those who only know how to criticize will hardly ever achieve anything, especially if such criticism is not constructive.