Imperial Japanese Space Force - I traveled back in time to 1901 - Reviews

Writing Quality ★★★•Many things are translater or was written wrongly or not aligning to what it should be, some are also connected with each other without spacing ex: Iwillkill your...Story Development ★★★★•It's a solid 4 for me because of its superb story pacing, 2 scenes are kinda forced but it's still good.Character Design★★★★★• The way the author gave life to every character and how he/she can make the audience understand how they feel is already chef kissed. Although in the original world there's still some ladder being climbed for the MC to mature it still show its good potential.Updating stability★★★★★• Might change it later....World Background ★★★★★• Since MC is being put to different world or should I say 'virtual world' it gives the story different vibes and different backgrounds but since it's still on the trial and onky released 20 chapters it has potential. This is one of the great trial novel I've read here on this site couldn't believe they actually put something new or kinda 'new' which is pretty much better than the other "novel" which is basically a copied version of a copied version of the original novel.I'll give this one a solid 4.4 and I gladly recommend this...You got my vote....

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average writing quality, average storytelling and just barely average translation quality. And for me the problem isn't related to that there are other novels with similar storylines, there are only so many stories that can be told and if someone does it better than I have no problems whatsoever that I have already read a similar story. And that is where the problem is with this story, I have read a similar story that was written much better. The storytelling was much better, there is a natural progression in strength increase and not sudden hikes, and things happen for a good reason. Characters are written well and they have good motives for their actions. All things that I have not found in this novel. And I haven't even spoken about the dodgy translations where I'm constantly thinking 'no the author couldn't have meant this? or could he?' (P.S. in my star evaluation I have filled in the updating stability as if it was translation quality)

Given the prospect as well as potential it will be long one, but will you be dropping it in the middle? Otherwise reading a downgraded version of the overgeared and even not complete wil be waste of time

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really a great novel , every one should try it , i like the story , and the mc character i think mc should be a lil coutious and a lil dark to make it a lil intresting  very best of luck with you work, really appreciated ! we are ready for the roller coaster along the story

What a nice descriptions of both characters and the setting. You really came up with an interesting plot and I really like it. Hope you continue updating bro. Honestly I this book next step is exposure.

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I went in with low expectations, but this novel was surprisingly fun. The novel reminds me a little of the Yakuza games with over-the-top characters sprouting over-the-top monologues. There was even a character who ripped open his shirt to show his tattoos!  I'm not sure if this will be picked from the trial read, but it is good. Read it for a time.

The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!

The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

HI guys i am writer of this novel . giving review on my own novel if you find this novel  good or bad please give your review so i can  learn from my mistake and do better in future