Great Story, don't really have anything to complain about unless I pick away at every little thing. But that would just ruin the experience. The only 2 changes I would ask for to improve the experience. It would be more frequent uploads. the 2nd change would be either an upload schedule or a timeframe letting us know when we can expect another chapter. An example of what I mean by timeframe would be the following at the bottom of the synopsis:
{
"1 chapter will be uploaded 2-3 weeks after the last chapter was uploaded."
}
Or at the end of each chapter letting the audience know when they should expect the next chapter. An Example:
{
"*A Chapter"
"Next chapter should be uploaded in 2-3 weeks"
---------------------------------------------------------------
*Comments
}
Just to let the audience know what the situation is. As it is not uncommon for light novel to get abandoned without the author ever saying anything, because they were no longer interested in it or wanted to write something else.
