Immortal Pervert's Return - Reviews

My main issuie is grammar, the overall story is decent.

this is a daylight robbery a14sp for a chapter atleast make it 4 like the normal or let it ads as normal but 14sp sorry i gonna drop it, thanks.

It's not even released yet (nor i never read it before).. but even though, i can sense the cliches..lots of them..i can feel it..they're coming!no one will save us!thestatsguy has already fallen.there's no hope left for all of us!. . .i cry.

points so just writing anything don't consider it points so just writing anything don't consider it points so just writing anything don't consider it

Wonder what I was thinking expecting a mystery novel of discovering and studying ancient relics and ruins... Instead we have this dogsht face slapping trash of a spineless cuck arguing with random forum trolls with zero logic behind anything that's going on...  This is literally the same as that "humanity is gone" novel from previous novels. Just endless amount of random trash comment written and then MC does something to prove them wrong and after that the cycle repeats itself... No world building no real story just dogsht meant to upset you so you keep reading them despite there being absolutely nothing to read storywise...

dang, great story. I love it ❤️  I started reading the manga 1st, and then I read this story . so good the Manwha is still going . anyways I had a great time reading this. anybody else reached the end hopefully you guys enjoyed it too. Peace out everyone, may we " Meet" in another story's comments if we're fated too.

This shouldn't even be in the trial reads with the quality of this story. It should just be translated right away without us needing to pick it. Seriously webnovel you are wasting our trial read spots. If you are thinking about reading it you won't regret it. It is very good.

Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right

please for the sake of all that is good complete this novel please... it is amazing and I haven't laughed this good since library of heavens path and universal ultimate boss ... why are the good books dropped

So you are saying that the Mc , a 7 year old kid who lived only 2 year in ninja world , could fool Monkey god of shinobi (faking fear and portraying himself as a naive kid ).... I dont know about others but this 'acting like kid' thing is really putting me off ....

Arthur caught Doctor Patrick's eyes rolled back in his head before he collapsed to the ground like wet laundry. He did not expect the Jade Rabbit would have so much power within its small frame... especially considering how cute it was. Obviously, one could not judge a book by its cover.

Today is his happy day because his wife Lilly is giving birth his first children. He was waiting outside the room, felling both anxious and happiness.after sometime pass a maid come out said to him his wife given birth a son.hearing the news he gives the maid some gold coins and enter his wife room with smile.