Immortal Odyssey: My Family Is Invincible - Reviews

I, Melon dao approves this scripture and decided to add it to my forbidden library of culture. This venerable is very pleased as you are doing a honorable job of teaching and spreading culture and hope you continue to this sacred quest.

This scripture belong to the genre of game to reality and Mc will develop a invincible family with different kinds of waifus.

Last but the least, This Scripture Has No yuri and Ntr!

This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Give it a try; as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I will improve as I keep on writing

PS. Positive Suggestions are always open and welcome.

I have only read the first couple of chapters, but I want to say that I  had been a very enjoyable read and I hope you continue to upload. Great Job

keep going my friend
the path is long
but what u have created is good
have faith in yourself and keep going

The book is very enjoyable to read and the plot flow is very nice. The character development is also good, I can't wait to read more chapters.

After reading everything till here i would like to say a few words. I like the setting and the fact that you will soon start the game world, i like the smut  and the progression so far.

What i didn't like about the history is the beggning, i can say that i would change the order of some chapters and for me would make more sense. Keep going

love the story author keep going.
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