Good novel+ for World Background( The author created a believable world that I hope gets even better as the story progresses, the idea of a magic system is at best mediocre, but it is getting a big plus for the consistency which is no small feat and the author can be quite proud of it.)- for Character Design( The protagonist is not that bad. I personally liked that you tried to give him some depth, but in the end he is like a bad side character, we know almost nothing about him and most of the character traits you tried to give him get forgotten after 5 chapters.The side characters are all just not good , we have no rival , an antagonist that just appears in the middle of the story and a love interest that couldnt be more unimportant.For real if I had to decide if the love interest or that random weaponsmith had to die , well you know who I would choose.)I can also see that you improve yourself with every chapter written, the second arc is way better then the first and I really think you got talent. Keep writing.
