Imagination system - Reviews

there's not much to go on right this second but it's got the groundwork to be something better than a lot of other things I've read so I can't wait to see where you go from here

I like the story and progression but man these translations need some serious work at times. constantly getting the realms and genders wrong makes this extremely annoying to read at times. I've submitted well over 100 corrections. Hopefully they get done. Other than that it's a story I would rank 8.5/10 overall.

This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more ? Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?

It's been a nice read so far???The author put in the best efforts to make it amazingI'm always rooting for you???It's a nice book, really

Shukaku: "Hm what happened?Where am I and what's up with my body?" He asked while looking at me with a confused expression.I didn't know how to answer him though as I was just as confused so I asked 'STATUS!'

The girl shook them off like they were nothing as she started chanting a spell.

Carla looked over at me sulkily and slowly shut her eyes, reopening them a few seconds later.

I think something is wrong with Lhayla.

'She really is a kid.' Edgar then began to walk out the room. 'How old is she really? I didn't get to look at her age on her ID...'  

"fine...  you win " she said with a shake voice and a pale face she has no choice but accept defeat he can easily take away her citizenship and cause her hard work to melt down like an ice

"If I may ask, where did you meet such low lives like them?" I asked, gesturing at the small pile of bodies.

I thought that author know only how to describe thrilling and fighting scenes but this small description of Ying Jun made me read it third time, how cute,