The father is not worthy of being a father. He sold off his daughter and sealed her meridians for a mere title. And yet she still considers this father. Fickle human heart. He allowed her daughter to be powerless. That is no father. If it were me, war would have been a better option. Let the the 2 kingdom fight. Chaos is a ladder for opportunities.
Only read what was free. Don't think I'll continue reading. It feels forced, doesn't flow naturally. Spelling and grammar are done well, only minor mistakes. It feels flat, no real hook into the story making me want more.
I love the story and it’s a pity that Miss Quill was burnt to death. But i still do hope that she’s still alive. And I don’t know what happened next because i wasn’t able to open the page.
