I'm the emperor of a Dynasty - Reviews

The plot is written quite smoothly. Well done. I would say that the expression and use of language for this type of genre is subpar. There needs to be more 'umph' and excitement when writing and describing gory scenes. On a final note, some of the grammar was rather askew - I would advise fixing this so your next readers can enjoy your work!

I can just appreciate that you write such a good book!I just loveeee it?❤️------Soooo I catched up with with the chapters and can say that the book is really well written as well as the character design. The Mc is pretty Badass and knows what he is doing (in terms of survival and not women...*caugh*caugh* Amandla) and the side characters are as well pretty damn good(execpt Francis he is not my type characteristically because I find him a bit annoying). I would love too she Lazar keep growing and find new powers! Keep up your great work Author-san and happy new year and enjoy your holidays! ?❤️

And now, I was completely speechless. The moment I heard that I wasn't from this world, I lost my senses and my vision of my surroundings. Nothing made sense anymore. I reassured that I was sitting in the chair, and looked at the palm of my hand. Firmly, I formed a fist out of it and questioned what Echidna said.

I cast my gaze around the room again before returning to Hiruzen waiting for him to continue.

His stomach wasn't full still so he took another leg that was finished even faster than before.

Xin knew that life was a Bitch but he didn't know that it also a Dominatrix and a Fucking Sadistic one at that.

Once Lance had informed an elder, news quickly spread about their match and of course, Zen's parents heard of it.

Element: doesn't have a element and so its a thing called "No-Element" and "No-Element" are where it has a power but nothing like fire or wind or something like that.

"I have two good news and a bad news" Joker explained, "the good news is we are going to unveil the new installment for the ABO game and for the Link start initiative"

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

it's boring and illogical in places, I can't read more than two chapters at a time because I fall asleep

looking forward to it!!.................