Cons The writing has some errors, most frequently with tenses and punctuation. There are no updates so that's a bummer. Pros (really more Cons, I tried)Story has some linear development, but there is no goal, no interesting plot; there is absolutely nothing to keep you engaged in the story. The world background was explained in the earlier chapters so that's great. However, in terms of scenery and alure. Flat 0. It's just.... The characters are just....
