If the world had no daytime (GL) - Reviews

Give you 5 star .. .. .Please dont drop this and updatr more chapter. .. .maybe someday he can use rasengan. ..And i like the part the mc little harem. ..

disgusted by the system and the dumb MC............................................................. . .. . .. .. .  ..   ,............... Б

great start cant wait to see what comes next

One of those gets pulled into a different world by a system novels, but even though they are in a completely different world the nationalism/racism can't help but creep in. Your standard if you aren't Han Chinese you aren't good...even though it's a different world and the idea that this random people who look the same would actually be the same makes zero sense.

The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining.So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS. All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!

Ryn watched silently as her best friend looking at her wardrobe. She did not even comment when her best friend threw one after another outfit from the wardrobe onto the bed.

I had to redo this multiple times and was ready to curse my paternal grandmother Fire, for not blessing me with her skills but leaving me with her read hair and damned freckles.

"It's only been a couple of hours."

Reappear Radius: 3.25 meters

There was a small silence which was broken by....

MP:472

Hello everyone, its the Author here! I just thought I'd drop some thoughts onmy own book.As you can see, I didn't rate it a full 5 stars. As much as I love my own work, I cannot deny that it isn't perfect, especially as my very first book.So far, we have yet to truly dive into the world of the story and while wecontinue that journey, I gladly welcome those who choose to follow. You're infor a lot of surprises.For any new person who comes across this, while the first few chapters mighthave a few errs, it gets better in every aspect. Trust me on that ?While you're at that, you can check out my newly released book. One I know isdefinitely better having learnt some valuable lessons from this one.You're free to ask questions tooTill later, from your sincere author— Passing_Byy