waiting for the continuation and give a better review when 100 chapters are releasedkeep up the good work author and hopefully the contract motivates you to write more
the writer thought is jumping around erratically. at beginning it's not bad quite good in fact but then it worsened and this novel looks like one of those novel that got written on a spark of inspiration but then he lost those spark and the novel became trash.
MC is either the grandpa or the granddaughterAnyways grandpa is a cultivator who returned to earth and reunited with his great grand daughter who is a chinese twitch-equalivent streamer. Chat gets hyped up to see the old man do mysterious things.Daughter has no idea.That's pretty much it so far.
i just started reading your novel and so far it is really good , you are doing well for a beginner , loved the way you described your characters , i wish you all the best in the future good luck author.
Interesting story truly and then the updates are just something I wouldn't wait for because once I get back from work it is always present. The characters...Gosh, so relatable and lovely(wouldn't want to add to any spoilers hehe)but there's only some grammatical errors. i think fixing it would be the best.
