It’s like the IQ of the prople are just cardboard cutouts with poor AI or piloted by SPED people. Purer than a newborn virgin in the writing, as it has literally no editing whatsoever. Don’t read.
The beginning of the story was good but after that the story starts to get very slow and boring not to mention that there is a character that many people don't like
Story with huge potential. Hope to continue with same the momentum..............................................................................................................................
Her presence reminded them about the odd rule in the organization: thou shall not discriminate nor underestimate your opponent's gender. Alas, before their mind could function, it was interrupted by her words, again.
Senyum Bang Dollah... dan mereka fuck lagi selepas berrehat sementara itu.. Gayah dan anak anaknya dah balik kampung.. Rose tahu ni.. sebab Gayah yang beritahu dia... nasih lah Kak Gayah, Rose tumpang nikmat kak Gayah sekejap hari ni... ni...
Eloriel 's head dropped on his chest. Her hands were holding on his shoulder as if her life and her everything was only holding together thanks to them.
Night came by without her notice. She glanced at the window in front of her and started thinking what will she do tomorrow and suddenly reminded of her agenda to meet and have fun with her friends.
