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I will survive even if the world is against me
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I'll keep it short, the author is either a troll or has nil experience in all the tags on this story. This story is logic-free and every single detail in it is worthy of a bucket of cringe.Mc character: idiotic. Game mechanics: wacky at best. World building: kindergarten-level imagination. Plot: Don't know. My braincells lost weight after reading though. Read at your own risk.I really wanted to like the story but i failed. I wish you good luck in that endeavor!
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First off everything gets 5 stars. I've read everything released up to today at this time and I found little no to errors. (and I was looking). Updates are clearly stable seeing how many are out already. The story is great and the character design is perfect, I'd love to say more but no spoils from me. Read for yourself so you can get attached and feel the heartache I did. Lastly, world background is very typical for a system-based novel, but there was one change I've not seen before so it was new.All and all recommend 10/10 even though it's out of five but technically theirs a total of 25 stars for 25/25 read, why are you still reading this review. READ!
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Nice...this book is good and I really love the theme, synopsis made be feel like an idiot bcoz  of this sentencewho am I?I'm Ray no matter what I couldn't stop smiling looking at it. (I just felt it funny)
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Your writing skills are quite unique and the story development is smooth as well. Though I don't read martial arts genre books much, this novel has turned my views completely. Keep your hardwork! You are doing great!☺️
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left this novel for like 3 months and now there's 4 volumes, im pretty excited to see what y'all be cooking up on here, keep up the hard work and quit slacking!
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I had only read up to pair games (almost 20 chapters). The reason is simple.1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler* 40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
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Superb. All I can say is that this is really well written. Every story is interesting and  the characters are well designed, and their emotions are well projected and expressed. Cliffhangers were also good. Definitely worth to read until the last one, and I look forward for another set of stories to binge after this one. Good Work!
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A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck
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I just hope that author continues with this book. Got lots of potential. Please don't leave Roman behind!!!

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