I transmigrated into the novel's rich villain - Reviews

The quality of translation of this dropped far too much the new group EndlessFantasy Translation ruined this novel and I can't recommend this story to anyone anymore.

currently in chap 18 so far the story is good. it has a lot of potential. I like like the fast pace and no drama so far. Pretty ?............

It is okay. the characters are flat at times, but the way they act to each other is good, they are pretty cool. Also some cool superpowers. It is pretty cool, and I do like it... Not an amazing story, but an interesting one. B

If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess.The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened."The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters.It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.

So this has TONS of great qualities. Its actions scenes are very well thought out and the other scenes attempt to fill in the life of the MC to some degree.

Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.

The bird first hesitated, then he left the cage. It tried to fly and failed miserably.

Suddenly a deathly chilling aura appeared from the words causing the man floating in midair to fall down, and the aura disappeared replaced with a gentle life aura rousing the man from his unconsciousness.

A girl with black short hair waved her hand while running towards Sonia. Just when Sonia was about to turn, she already rammed Sonia directly on her back and both of them almost tripped.

[Due to berserk nature, skill [Leaping Strike] modified]

The Alfan nodded and gave him the device, which he inserted into his ear.

'Cole used to, but recently we've all been working together.'