I reincarnated in my favorite novel as Darkness - Reviews

It's literally the first thing I'm writing, I'm a little unsure how the story will progress, but I'll do my best![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The story is decent but the writing quality makes it torture to read.

Bruh let me just put it in a way you'll understand..... if you haven't read this then you don't enjoy life.
One of the BEST nove on this app.
1) no Bullsh#t like weak to strong mc
2) not a beta
3) not a pervert whose goal is to capture women like Pokemon

4) well developed plot to the point HE SHOULD BE WORKING ON COMICS!!!
5) a PERFECT story for those who don't like op mc form the start-- Though I seriously still don't understand why people don't like a op mc-- but regardless a PERFECT reason why he can't so readily destroy the universe ### I won't spoil the reason but I SWEAR TO GOD it is perfection#####

dreadful wrighting, grammer, and everything inbetween. intresting premise, but its painfull to read.

The novel deserves nothing absolutely nothing I would give it a 1 star but some of the writing was good but I don’t understand is the MC Tomas or Charles? Also is MC a Female or male also this novel is a Walmart version of the name ju jutsu kaisin

Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished.

The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it.

I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.

So it's this a villain Mc? Where's the tag?

Would have been better to have more world building and character development. There wasn't really much anything from the novel that he got reincarnated on.
There will be some "Author Note" here and there in a middle of a chapter trying to explain some things, better if it was integrated in the story rather than posting it.

Wow just wow. its been long since I read anything except fanfics but this is a nice change of pace

i havent read this yet it seem that it has potential but is held back by bad grammar really hope that gets fixed
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Guys, you need to relax and cut the author more slack on his first good novel.  I love the concept of this world, and the world background building is utterly astounding. I also love the characters and actual story arcs with them. It doesn't make sense you guys don't care about the characters since there is honestly no guarantee darkness will spare them. Now for the criticism, this story gets 3.8 stars. I feel like the stability of updates should be a little better, maybe like a stable chapter every 2 days. Also, the novel's pacing is a little too fast and in the beginning, Thomas feels more like the main character than darkness. The romance between Darkness and Darkness simply doesn't make sense and feels extremely forced. There was no development to explain how she's there, It's also explained multiple times it's not in Darkness' nature to feel the romance. Yet, for some reason with absolutely no development, Mc meets the 'previous Darkness' and she loves him to bits as soon as she comes in. Also, the grammar is good but the punctuations and commas need to be more focused. Also, the wording in the sentences could use a bit more work in my opinion.

This is my first review, so here we go. I really like the idea of the story, but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes. I advise you to rewrite the chapters because your book has a lot of potential. By the way, the character of Thomas is quite annoying, literally, so I'd really like to see him eliminated or help find a new body for charles to get  in upcoming chapters.

p.s this review is purely based on the first few chapter