I married my father's billionaire rival - Reviews

This is honestly just my personal opinion. I enjoyed the first 150 or so chapters, but the further it went the more conflicted the story felt. where I've left off there are alot of holes and confusing/conflicting concepts starting to go through the blender and it simply killed my interest in the story. Don't get me wrong I'm all for other worlds and magic/cultivation type things, i just feel like it was overstuffed, leaving a lot of loose ends that are essentially kicked out/cut by way of a time skip. the confusion then continues on from there with alternate dimensions as well as other worlds, not to mention the whole "this is all a book/novel come to life

From what I read so far, the story looks really great. Looking forward for new chapters. Keep updating on regular basis.         Happy writing.

This is just bad. The setting is barely mentioned beyond a couple brief paragraphs of exposition. The MC has a system. The entire plot seems to rely on a series of "funny" misunderstandings to move things forwards.

Have you started again? Only drawaback was the stopping of the novel for almost a year. Everything else is just top notch.

Alright, shamelessly putting a 5 star review. If you liked my story, i hope that you will review it and add to your library. This is my first story, and i know it has flaws.I have planned for more chapters. Will write and post them periodically.Thank you.

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