hmm how to say this... Let's see, it's normal for authors to be inspired by a story to create their own story. The problem was that the author was too inspired by TAP (The Author's POV). The beginning has several elements similar to TAP, and when there are so many similar elements, comparisons are inevitable. To be honest, if you read this story without knowing TAP, you will probably think: "hey, this is a good story". But if you know TAP... as I said, the comparison is inevitable. Let's start with writing. The author needs to improve in this area. It is readable but needs improvement. For me, who use google translate, the errors get worse. Reading the story I think Lucas is not an extra. Lucas is versatile using sword, daggers and powerful magic. He is OP. Lucas is not stupid but also not smart (compared to the MC of TAP). He works hard and trains a lot. He doesn't stay discreet for long. So far there are almost 0 human interactions with the other races. I hope there will be some change soon. At the moment, I believe Lucas is too stuck in the human realm. There are very interesting mysteries in the work about the protagonist's family, evil cults, super powerful beings, gods... This is very good.It seems the author is very wary of Lucas' interaction with other girls. It's as if the author thought: "Lucas is very hot. It's very difficult to write him interacting with other girls of his age without them throwing themselves into his arms". For example, Rose is Fredrick's love interest from the beginning. Nearly 200 chapters and Lucas' interaction with Rose is zero. I do not understand this. I really feel that the author is very cautious about including girls in the story. I don't know if this story will be a harem or not (I must admit that when the mc is as amazing as Lucas, with the potential to be the emperor of everything, I prefer a humble harem of 2 or 3 girls. After all, the good seed has to be spread hehehe The protanonist, the girls and humanity win and are happy) but I ask the author to include female friendships. Come on, aren't there any girls with potential that the mc wants to include in his group? This may even serve to make the princess feel some jealousy and realize her feelings for Lucas. To conclude, although the beginning has many elements similar to TAP, the author begins to take his own direction in the future in his work. I believe this story has good potential and that the author is getting better. It is very enjoyable to read and I recommend it to everyone. Just don't compare it too much to TAP and I guarantee you'll have fun reading it.I hope this review has helped in some way. Keep up the good work, author-san XD
