first of all, the writer doesn't know how to do math or something cause every single number is incorrect, either the writer is lazy or didn't even finish grade 3 since it's fricking easy math.second of all, the writer didn't even mention the character descriptions except the fact she has these big sacs on her chest and curvy body and her hair, not even describing how the face looks.also a lot of grammatical mistakes which could be ignored but still and I Think the writer just doesn't want to complete the words, like for example the word t-shirt got spelled "tee" like dude, what?third of all there is no word background description, or at least not enough, the writer is even so bored he doesn't even want to describe the entrance to the castle, like where are the rooms, what is in there exactly, he just mentions there is a room with a bed and closet at least from chapter 15 and before.
