The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, ? I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️ in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️