I HATE YOU.... - Reviews

Cliche as fuk. Somehow, amazingly, surprisingly i dont actually really understand the first 2 chapter. That how i know either it a ****ty story or translations suck. Good day

it blatant copy paste from "the legendary mechanic" same prologue, same power system, same code name "zero

☝️☝️☝️????Do follow Author at @GomiSakka on twitter for advance glimpse of new chapters and to motivate author senpai?????Volume 2 also coming soon do look forward to it like me

Hi guys, this author review is around chapter 190 and I would like to say a few things.1. A big THANK YOU to all of my readers, and for all of you who are rooting after Elliot, Jennifer, Jessica, Jessica, Wu Kong and Jules! I have a ton more surprises in store, it'll be a great ride ahead!*spoiler ahead*2. To all my potential readers/supporters. All of the characters around the MC will be pretty strong, so don't worry too much about him having "baggage". 3. His two sisters are going to be epic down the line, so don't worry about that either.4. There are races in this novel, but it will mostly deal with the beast system in the beginning. So don't expect to read about racing until around chapter 80.5. My discord server has pictures and inspirations in it so you can have a richer reading experience. Do consider joining it! :DOverall, I think this is a fun LIGHT novel to read. I apologize if there are slight mistakes and slight plotholes, I am very open to questions and discussion, so feel free to drop your comments!  Do try to give this novel a chance if you're thinking of reading it. Thank you!! :D

I really love the book coz its storyline is very different , interesting & intriguing . It keeps me hooked to it ❤❤❤Always eager for more updates

World background is extremely complex and in some strories it's good but here it doesn't make any sense. You don't understand anything to the point that I doubt even the author knows where this is going. I mean lot of reactions don't make sense at all and the transitions between all the timeline are horrible (no indication or even clues about what's happening)Then the MC. In a great number of LN the MC is one if not the problem and unfortunately in this story it's the case. The MC is not entirely stupid (sometimes it's okay) but he is naive, like really naive. And he stay naive even after he get back his memories. I was expecting if not a cunning MC at least a sly MC who could use his past knowledge to help protect the ones he love (it's his only goal). So for example, a girl he likes told him she doesn't like nobles and then a noble girl ask him to spar with her cause she's interested. He could have accepted to show the girl he likes that until she is strong enough she has to play along with others even if it's only to protect herself.But no the MC straight up reject the noble girl who's by the way narrow minded, which lead to another major problem: the originality. This story is the generic story but with a background a lot more messy than usual but that's all. The same product with a different packaging.It could have potential.

The story while well written is more about lemons than it is about 40k. Every chapter along with confusing perspective shifts feels like it's working up for 18+ content and not progressing with being a warp god. Also it is very similar to another story written by 'dez_burns', suspiciously similar.

Tyler had half a mind to give Warren a sharp whack upside the head. He didn't want the unreasonable reason because it was most likely irrelevant and would make his head hurt.

Iroko stopped. She slightly turned her head, just seeming to look at her side. "That woman has yet to understand what she's looking for. An aimless hunt... a hunt for deities to devour, a predator looking for its real prey, but that prey has constantly evaded her. Staying here will make her aware of Prime's existence... other than the deities that she and her people seek to devour. Can you bear the consequence if it will allow her to find out about your sister existence, or worst, if she met face to face Little Prime on your way out as travellers?"

Shaka waved with one hand, and Jack eyes turned white and fell to the ground.

Liam runs to the football field. Sky and Djason walkes behind him. Sky looks at Liam with a huge smile on her face and Djason looks at Sky with twinkels in his eyes but when she turns her head he looks at the ground.

" Well no. But I wish that never happened to you. " I explain. I hear Moonlight chuckle.