To be honest, the early chapters were quite disappointing. They were below average. It's true that the main character (FL) treated the love interest (ML) harshly by ending things due to financial reasons. The logic that she'd seek revenge and make her friends look down because she was rejected seems flawed.
Initially, MC was quite kind to ML, so it's surprising how much they changed and decided to break up. There might be underlying reasons for their behavior.
I disliked how ML's friends treated MC at first, especially grabbing her collar. It didn't seem supportive or friendly. The ML's cold reaction also annoyed me. Despite MC saving him multiple times, they didn't owe each other anything.
Both MC and ML's reactions were understandable given the circumstances, but their attitudes were off. MC felt guilty, while ML seemed traumatized and irrational after being betrayed. While同情他, I also believed that friends should help each other, but their treatment of MC was unjust.
When they realized MC had most of the food, their priorities shifted. It frustrated me that MC didn't stand up for herself due to excessive guilt. She should focus on her feelings for ML, not concern herself with his friends.
MC's character seemed overly empathetic, and it felt manipulative at times. Just because she provided help and support, it didn't mean she owed them anything. It made the story feel forced and unconvincing, like an overused plot device.
As for the end-of-the-world scenario, their initial reaction to abandon MC was harsh, even if it was justified for revenge. It didn't take long for them to change their tune when they needed her resources. This inconsistency was frustrating.
ML took control of the situation, which was fair, but the dream manipulation felt manipulative too. I would've preferred if he sought understanding earlier, rather than relying on a dream revelation.
Overall, the initial writing felt amateurish, and it wasn't until later chapters that the concept started to make sense. While the friendship dynamics improved, I still didn't connect with them much. The original FL's development and eventual connection with two MLs was intriguing.
The dream sequence did pick up the pace, but I need to reach a point where MC isn't constantly fearful and guilty before giving a fair rating. Her conflicting statements grated on my nerves.
Until then, I'll hold off on a rating because I'm still in an angry state. I hope for a more balanced portrayal of MC in the future.