The novel is quite challenging to read, with frequent shifts in focus. Although the League of Legends (LoL) aspects are enjoyable, the rest of the narrative feels disjointed, as if portions were written by an AI and then clumsily integrated by the author. There are glaring inconsistencies in logic that suggest AI-generated content was adapted without proper cohesion with earlier chapters, which were released around the same time as AI advancements.
The storytelling jumps between characters abruptly, often without adequate introductions, leaving readers unsure if it's the main character's perspective or not until halfway through each chapter. The constant changes make it difficult to maintain context, as events and conversations differ significantly from one chapter to the next, as if unrelated chapters were pieced together without reference to the previous ones.
To summarize the first 17 chapters, the story begins with the protagonist being sentenced to death in a medieval fantasy setting due to a prophecy. She spends some chapters playing a modified LoL game before being rescued. It's revealed that she spent seven years trapped in a virtual reality pod with her deceased mother, who was actually her, aged only seven. Strangely, nobody questions the unusual circumstances, and she's labeled an illegal immigrant due to lacking a mandatory birth chip.
The MC is then placed in an orphanage, where she's diagnosed with a physical ailment and escapes to live at a PC cafe. The orphanage shows no effort to look for her, and she attributes her departure to the other children, whose interactions remain unseen. Eventually, a university professor adopting her after a chance encounter becomes the novel's saving grace, despite their brief meeting.
While I'll continue reading in hopes for improvement, I suspect many readers might struggle past the first ten chapters, mainly due to the LoL segments standing out positively among the rest of the content.
