It’s a really nice read, i do recommend this… BUT i just didn’t enjoy It when the main Character went with lightning abilities instead of staying with the hearth abilities… Hes just another thor now… the story is till good but he really should of stayed with it and focused on helping his followers more. it’s still a good story and i do understand why hes another “thor” but he could of just mixed greek and norse Mythology.
When I was shared the link of this story, I thought it was a waste of time trying it out but I was wrong. Best action story ever, twist and cliffhanger.
Not transparent, predictable. This is the first girl you've actually liked, of course it'll affect you. It already has. But you know what really makes me proud?
"Another is, would that spoiled pampered princess even want to marry me, when she is the center of all their operations. Others may not know, but I do for a fact, that she is one sly princess" I added to accentuate the fact.