I Betrayed My Alpha For A Foreign Prince - Reviews

I really love this story.. Horror fiction

really promises to be great, don't give it up, but all in all, I would like to see mc as king or at least some general I can't wait for him to come and show others his power, for example in the fight with a dragon

Author Lumydee, please update more chapters!!?  ??????????????

This novel is perfect for beginners in light novel reading. A light emphasis on describing characters and enviroment. Room for improvement but definetely worth reading.

The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential

So far good. Interesting story and nice grammar.

Thanks for the chapter!! I can't believe there is no comments! May be it's due to you posting chapters without us taunting you for them.

[Hey kid what is your name]

"It's part of the phase, since I've used up most my strength earlier"

Skye followed close behind, terrified. Lucky opened the door, revealing the empty room.

There also people who are suffering by waiting for gf//bf to comeback.

"I see." she answered and finished the meal. "I'm actually looking for someone. His name is Artrog. Do you know where I could find him?" He smirked.