I Belong to You - Reviews

The story starts off pretty well, doing a good job of introducing the plot and some characters (that at least feel real and have some depth) as well as relevant information about the world. I noticed a few errors in writing, be it tense or singular / plural mistakes, this could be an issue with translation(?)

Hi,

This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your "I Belong to You", I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there is so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take the opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.
It was a great pleasure to meet your story.

Sincerely
Nelly

This was a pretty good story. I of course loved the main characters and their character growths . I was a bit confused during all the fighting towards the end, because they kept jumping from scene to scene but all in all it was a good story. The ending feels a little unfinished, but it also can end there.

Good writing, great description, steady updates, nice story, and cool characters. My only issue with the story is that the grammar is a bit off. Please give it some edits and think about getting Grammarly. You are also welcome to check out my tale "Avatar: Macai's Journey".

I wanted to read the sequel 2

enjoyable! nice read

I just want that days of sorrow for Ivanna and Chris end.

DO NOT PURCHASE BOOK 2. It’s been incomplete for over a year. Just end at book 1 which is really good!