Ch19 - It's slow and feels super dry MC - I want to relate to this guy.....working a shitty job with an education background that could have got him something better, whilst surrounded by shitty colleagues but the Author just makes him come off like I'm meant to despise him.MC background - Has parents in the village, Has two Uni degrees, doesn't know martial arts - Yet author will always remind you of his degrees and tell you that he knew how to fight and he doesn't carry a umbrella cos he's a real MAN. World background - Gym, gym, gym gym, dorm and a abandoned factory. Side characters - His best friend has the most depth, Id like to see a story on him and his messed up relationship with his wife.
