I Became a New Magical Girl Priest - Reviews

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The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.

The most impressive part of the novel is that I didn't have to spend even a second yawning or whatsoever as a result of boredom or over familiarity ??The chapter are well aligned in the order the should be inI'm not done reading but I know I wouldn't regret this ?????More chapters please ?... So wouldn't have to wait a second for you to upload the rest Keep it up❤❤❤

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So far really interesting and intriguing love the development of the story but the mc is kinda stupid hopefully he will get better. The grammar is good but there are some different names in different places. Still worth a read

until now its quite the relaxing read. But a bit less young master Syndrome people would be cool.

As a fan of history and kingdom building I am enjoying this novel. MC is not overpowered just making smart decisions and has a decent personality. So far, great potential.

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He scribbled down a note to leave by Dami's bedside but changed his mind; a phone call was more appropriate. He left the house very quietly and luckily found an early bus to take him home.

Zi Jue went over the torture schedule he had in mind for Yan Qing Shan's stepmother. He planned to add a few more to that so he could vent his anger. That damnable woman and her schemes. He swore to himself that after Yan Qing Shan was done with her, that fiend will get some more from him.

"That is right boss. He asked us why we were stealing and when we explained, it was as if he understood us. He somehow found out that we were taking care of a Pokémon and told us to keep the stuff and that he'll pay for it. He also said that he'll visit tomorrow with medicine so we shouldn't bombard him with Sludge Bombs." The first Haunter explained in detail.

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