I became a father with a genius face in the game - Reviews

the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny

Lots and lots of fake 5 star positive reviews at chapter 0 ... and yet i can't stand the protagonist. The MC is a coward. The dialog is cringe-worthy and unrealistic. The rest of the characters are total idiots including the "magic academy" staff that fall for very bad acting. I couldn't go on. If it was something printed it would end up in the garbage at chapter 4.   There are a few fatty protagonists out there that are really likable. Ever read Chaotic Lightning Cultivation? Too bad that was dropped. :(If you disagree with this review please provide some arguments.Does it get better after a few chapters?

Its fine i guessAlthpugh interesting thing is that hvisland is a connected word consisting of hvis and landHvis in danish meaning ifAnd land = land

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Funny as hell. Full of comedy scenes making fun of xianxia stereotypes. I really like the story and looking forward to more updates from the author.

"TOTOO BA ANG SINASABI NG BABAENG ITO

They say stepping out of your comfort zone is a universal experience between humanity. That it should help you grow or burst out of your bubble so to speak. That it would help you make more friends, have more experiences, open up opportunity. But for me it always concludes the same way. Break out, mingle, delusional success. Failure. How do you expect someone to keep going out when you know the same old mundane routine of failure. Well… you keep trying. Because that's what life is. Trying, trying, and trying. Harder, harder, and harder. Throughout all of the hardships of trial and error. Until you find genuine success.

"itu sudah keharusan"

"Lizzie, don't think that you did wrong," mother says in her native tongue of Gonin. "We will get you out of here. An enchanter is not meant to be imprisoned and die whilst doing their jobs."

+ 1 all status

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

"whatever Frost. I was only messin around man, you didn't have to take it so serious." he said still glaring.