I Became a Childhood Friend of the Northern Duchess - Reviews

Oh Martial Arts Master, when will they finish you for good? What a horrible shame this novels is now drop/on hiatus... the story and plots were very appealing and the world background exiting (SPOILER: this world was like our earth but here The Fantasy Martial Arts / cultivation were real here). A very promising novel with urban Martial arts fantasy and romance completely on coma for stUupid reasons. Oh Martial Arts I really miss you.

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I am truly impressed by the author, honestly speaking if there ever was someone who would trade in a pile of gold solid gold for a worthless pile of rubbish it's this author right here. The starting and world foundation was excellent not too tiring to read exciting even the first chapter was dark and promising then Lord knows what happened but he or she decided to try and copy the brilliant comedy of a well known and loved mercenary and failed horribly. The world was amazing to imagine the mc with so much promise wasted. You can read it if you like but it'll most likely frustrate you in a bad kind of way. Author should have stuck to what you had it was magic

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Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.

this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.

I read this but I really can't understood how mc still immature even he reincarnated hundred times.I though he will quite scheming person and cunning but it doesn't feel to me.There's also mistakes in typos and some grammar

I'm just disappointed, I came to see a guy develop his hostel, act like a manager, I expected the plot to mainly revolve around the management of the hostel. What I got was a cultivation book with an inn in the background.

"Master Lelouch?" She asked, startled, as she reached for her dressing gown and pulled it around her. "Are you alright? What's wrong?"

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"Ah, Brian pala ang pangalan niya." Sambit ng dalaga sa kanyang isipan.