I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that!The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.