Its good in the earlier chap. After the court master in around 70ish chap. I then realise that its a constant repeat. The pov is not even with the mc anymore. And the romance is kept hanging. Author hust introduce a potential wife, then have her as a background character. Its boring and a repeat. Meet someone(a), then that someone(a) being another someone(b), then (b) also told another someone(c) and bring them to mc and repeat. No difference. Even the status are the same. The someone would be an important figure then will end up do anything to lick mc’s a**.
Bit of a slow start so far with a lot of information that is kind of out of nowhere without context. Likely stuff that will be cleared up within the first 100 or so chapters, but honestly this is the reason I think with these new novels they should release with a minimum 100ch backlog immediately. It really hurts them in the short term, since people are impatient and want something decent and new to read right away. It also means the early reviews like mine tend to be a bit on the low side due to lack of information and depth story-wise to give it anything better. I simply can't right now, however I will obviously edit my review in later chapters if it picks up.
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Decent story.The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine. The grammar and punctuation can be improved. There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion. Anyway, good luck with the story.
These two simple words became a mantra that kept him going in the game, and now, he would use it in real life. He would constantly refine and improve his techniques and abilities, till he was a force to be reckoned with.He would git so gud that his enemies would be the ones facing the Nameless ****. Any threats that endangered his family would be dealt with as quickly as possible, with no suspense. That was the power that he wanted, and the power that he would seize with the power of The Gamer.
The statues that was already in movement tripped over and the other got stuck in place. The red glow seemed to grow brighter as the looked at me. I decided that now was the optimal time to finish them off. I summoned what was essentially just and anvil with a stick in it over there heads and let it fall down on them and crushing them.
