Husband’s Night - Reviews

I think the chars are fun so far,  and the writing is believable and neat!  I'm not nearly caught up but this book has been a breath of fresh air recently!

really good!!                                                                                                                                                

why it reset back being 35 chapter after updating up to 122 chapter

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Awesome! I could not put the app down. I enjoyed reading this book and I am anticipating more. I check often for work such as great as this and hope to see more.

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The first 5 chapters is a huge info dump, but none of it is info you need nor wanted. On the parts where you need info there is not any. I recommend reading over what you wrote becuase there are a lot grammer and spelling mistakes. You should also consider writing from a point of view that it is happening to you Instead of saying then Whoever told us this. Use more quotes instead of saying someone said do this. There are many plot holes as well so consider filling those in. There are so many things wrong with the quality of writing that I assume you know of. The power system is not very good either. The story itself and the idea behind It is good, but the story is very poorly written.  I do not know the update schedule so i just put four for it. The quality of the book drops immensely the more I read. If you can rewrite the Chapters and improve your grammer I believe this could be a great book, but it is not for now.

The voice seemed to be agitated a little this time around as he said, "I'll be there in a few hours!!!"

"Actually I…"

"argh..." erangan perampok yang dadanya terkena panah beracun. yang lainnya segera menyebar lari menyelamatkan diri dari serangan yang tak terduga.

"I guess that you are right so let's leave after we woke up."

"Liburan ya? Tunggu sebentar, bukankah ada sekolah sihir di Jepang?"Iris bertanya.