This has been very impressive so far. Just when I think I know what will happen, the author takes a twist which pulls me further into the story. The concept is well thought out and the story jumps quickly to the action, making the plot move at an enjoyable pace. The MC is relatable and makes you want to root for him especially given his circumstances (trying hard not to put spoilers). Overall, you should check this story out. You will not be disappointed!
Don't stop writing this! Even if the contest is over keep going this is so freaking cute I am dying from nose bleeds! ???? I need more Alex and his awkwardness!!! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring you down.
The story is one of the best newer stories on the site. However, the recent transition from less frequent regular sized chapters to more frequent tiny chapters is infuriating. The new chapters feel like nothing has been accomplished. Go back to the other way as this is ridiculous.
I've taken an interest to this coz of that synopsis. Hope it stays true to the synopsis and is a "discovering amazing things in this vast world and trying to understand the Dao" type of story.But if it derails into a typical "you dare look at my girl,....ok then DIE!!" or some power cultivating without any logic or mindless slaughtering of ancient clans just because of a useless "young master" offending the MC then...........I would be disappointed...
So far it has been oddly chill for me, which felt relaxing.The first ten or so chapters are more of an introduction and everything feels nicely paced. Good work Author!
