HSK - Reviews

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!https://rb.gy/5s05wc

Im not sure with this novel. Now this seems to be a great promise. I dont know. But this novel is great. What to know.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no

Rashmi was feeling the pleasure and screming " Ahhhhhhhhhh "

"You're still young. There's still a lot of room for progress. Don't lose hope." The woman replied thoughtlessly.

The other Chosen One was Ashleigh which Nathan was surprised to learn about. She had the power to cure anything -- even restoring lost limbs and the zombie virus. However, it requires mana so she could only use it for a number of times a day.

"Hello?" A deep voice answered on the other side.

'yes'

Same, once I read that, it was an instant DROP for me. This idea is the most troublesome and angering that I just instant dislike the novel.

I had given them 3 million twice in 10 days, and, having smelt money, they kept coming as if one day was really far away.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~