The translation I have read so far is fine, I do not know if it gets worse later on or not. So far to me it is about average compared to every other novel on the site. My problems with the story is that the author seems to be completely incapable of building up his characters and the worlds setting naturally and flow along with the story. Instead we get literally 10 paragraph info dumps about everything. It feels like I am reading a text book, not a novel. Not to mention in the 4th chapter, the author gives you the ending of the story. He completely spoils his entire novel and the synopsis you see above. He doe's it threw, yes you guess it a needless info dump that doesn't fit at all with flow of the chapter. It just appears out of no where and spoils it. Over half the fun of reading a story is finding out how it all comes to an end, yet here we see the end before it even begins.
