Homecoming (Lesbian) - Reviews

amazing...

It's so sad about the needs to spend a lot of my spirit stones to continue reading this novel story. I can't help it but I lowered my ratings on the translations/translators.

Hello and an honest review from me. The story was good, minor grammar mistakes so that's great. The flow of the storyline in the first chapter is simple without any twist or turn. Other than that, keep up the good work author ??

The best way to describe this novel is: Potential.The first few chapters have laid a solid foundation for what could be a great novel.The only thing that could be done better would be grammar.

Pretty good start I'd say. Keep on writing author. I think the character development in your story is really good particularly. Good job!!!!!!

I put a lot of effort into this, please help cheer me up guys and in turn, I won't let you down..please and thank you all.

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