Hollywood Lily Harem - Reviews

Your genders are frequently confused, disturbing the flow and wrecking my enjoyment. Otherwise, very interesting...
I don't have any other relevant observations to share!

I'm so confused
the author sometimes uses "you" instead of "I" for some reason and the female mc is always called little guy and sometimes chris it's confusing as **** and I for one can't continue reading.
story is great tho

I enjoyed the story but needs some grammar polishing. It doesn’t distract from the story to much but does get a little tiresome. It was nice to have a FL that wasn’t depicted as a total moron.  Overall, I would recommend and will definitely be waiting eagerly for book 2.

JAS-If the book is complete, please mark it as such.

Thanks for the update ms winter hope the relationship wl go another level already...can't wait to see Stef n Jacob...having a baby

J Tarr is a freaking savage!!! Already hooked with all the unexpected twists that only she can deliver in a story!

It's a very interesting book. I just wish the author had more time and well-being to focus on writing the novel tho...️...