His sex slave - Reviews

If you’re planning to read this book, STOP DON’T WASTE YOUR TIME!!!!!

Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion. Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor. The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect. I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.

A NEW SPORTS NOVEL, LETS GO!!!! Though I prefer basketball and (American) football, I love this novel. A bit lacking on the action side but it’s still a 4/5 from me. Good luck author, I only expect the best from you ?

Good story, the main character does not conform to either the stereotypical god-like villain mold, nor does he conform to the stupidly op hero mold. He seems human-like in that he makes mistakes, but at the same time, his foreknowledge should not be underestimated. All in all linri harclaw, and the soul inside him named max is a character that is human and relatable. His fellow companions are human like as well displaying flaws and mistakes that make the novel all the more compelling.

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If you are looking for a good sports/football novel, this is the one. Currently the MC is transitioning from Belgium League 2 to Sheffield United in League One of the EFL.

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Story buildup is great , character development need improvement but it is good, hope you keep doing the hardwork and don't drop this novel. There aren't many stories that focus on world development here its great.

"Your sister gave you this tiger?" Liu Lian said squeezing her hubby's hand that seemed tense.

please come back we need more