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His New Obsession
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People say he is stupid, but you seem to forget that the moment he got his search bar, he was twisted by revenge his mentality changed, emotions unstable but it was kept in check by vengeance, you think he would he would keep his mentality from before his imprisonment?the love for his gf is a remnant of pre-twisted personality, and the author was so stupid that he was in a rush to complete the story and his incompetent rush made his work incomplete.the current story is hallow bone, his changes are not elaborated on, and there are many pieces are missing, the author is stupid and abandoned his almost master piece into a incomplete work.
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this novel is so good 5 stars                                                                                                                                                               
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Nice one, shows a lot of promises. Love the plot. Love the Mc's development. I just hope the novel will have a steady chapter realise.I'll give it a 5 star ?
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It's a very good novel to bing if you enjoy doing so , and for me personally I'm planning on stopping where I am because I feel that I'd get more enjoyment and less cliff-hangers with my strategy of wait till at least 10 chapters are there to bing.
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This is outragous, this is unfair✌? Master Windu:                                                               . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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I feel like I'm reading from the authors real experience. It seems like there is a thin line between fiction and reality. Looking forward to the nxt events.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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It's a little ridiculous how Leo's stats are off the charts, but in 7, it kinda makes sense. It takes a while for the actual story to get good but the fights are pretty dope. Dialogue needs a bit of work tho
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"No, if the situation was different then maybe," Ichigo said in a serious voice. "But with them wanting to pick us off I think it is better for us to stick together," he said while the others nodded. The group then began walking up the stairs of the museum and pushed open the doors. When they entered the museum hey couldn't see anything. It was pitch black due to the lights being off. The only thing they could see was the giant skeleton of a T-Rex illuminated by the moonlight. The thing the group heard was the sound of a little girl giggling through the P.A system.
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Rogue ran as fast as his muscular legs could carry him, making the earth tremble and shaking the trees to their roots. The titan whimpered loudly with each step, hoping that he wasn't going to be too late. Soon, he found the wall. For a moment, Rogue stared at it in wonder; it was most defiantly higher than the tree. The titan then placed his hand upon the stone, running his fingers and sharp nails upon the bricks and between the grout. Like the rocks of his cove and in the forest, the wall was incredibly hard. Even if he could somehow scale up the fifty-meter wall, he could be too late. In his panicked state, Rogue searched his mind frantically, trying to focus on anything that could solve his current predicament. Suddenly, he recalled the other gate that his little ones ventured through earlier. Yes, there had been lots of humans there, but the titan was far too desperate. He had to get in the massive human home!
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Level: 5
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Leaving them each fainted. Throwing out a few pokeballs and catching quite a few of them for my farm.

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