HIS ETHEREAL QUEEN - Reviews

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If this story weren't Google translated, it may be halfway decent. The poor grammar made it so I couldn't even make it through the first chapter though.

Nth + 2 times my review is deleted.....But I will review it every day so the author can understand how much trash this novel is..... Beware this novel is trash among trash...

When will it be released ...................................................................................................................

Good novel, but the grammar, structure, writing quality, etc, leaves a lot to be desired. Frequent spelling errors, incorrect or poor word choice, among other problems leaves me with no choice but to rate it as I did. the novel is above average for webnovel but thats not exactly a high bar.

The MC is being led around by the nose, and the author says he is an idiot from the  beginning and it really shows. It is so aobvious that its infruraiating. The story capitalizes on the MCs stupidity to further the plot by scamming, tricking, and misleading the MC with terrible vagueness that only he would fall for.It is a really well made story, if you don't mind the MC being lead around and not taking intiative. He mopes around about a past that he was determined to leave behind. The synopsis and intro came of as presenting this as a slice of life novel, where we watch the MC explore the game world with minimal fighting. But nope he just gonna be thrown through the wringer again and become another 'HERO'Just my out look on it, will stop reading it,may come back to it when I feel I can put up with the idiocy of the MC.

Conceptually very interesting but the quality of the translation is so poor that it is nearly unintelligible. I really tried to like this one

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The students lined up being this youth had already been shocked speechless at the sight of him pulling out so many monster cores. They thought back to how much energy they had consumed in the forest just to retrieve 2-3 monster cores; to them, this had already been quite an amazing achievement. Many of them had even felt quite proud of this. Yet the youth in from of them had pulled out many times more monster cores than they had received within the last 3 days in a single breath. How could they not be shocked? Having fought against the Class 1 Magical Beasts quite a few times, they had been left with a deep realization that without reaching Saint level, using an iron weapon to kill Class 1 Magical Beasts with such thick skin was extremely difficult.

"What do you say,sla—partner?" (Bai)

The child's name was John Markee. He was an average young man at the age of 17, a friendly personality and a wish to make others laugh, but deep inside hid a demon. This demon was self-created, self-inflicted. John spent much of his time suppressing it, attempting to push it away from the light back inside the dark recesses of his consciousness. This demon was crafty, although John always seemed to control himself there were times when it reared its ugly head and made its voice know. This was a scary time for John as he knew he was losing. He knew, that one day it would appear and he would be unable to control it. HIs thoughts turned darker as time progressed, focusing more on fear and paranoia. It was strange to watch him change, to watch his morals degrade. The first sign was the separation of friends. He seemed to slowly push them away, in such a way that none would notice. This isolation became a catalyst for further degradation ultimately leading him down into a death spiral.