His Dangerous Bride - Reviews

This story is pretty shit to be honest. It's about the demon king of lust, but all he does is going a round killing everyone like a psycho. it wouldn't be bad if it at least somewhat lived up to the 'lust' persona, but it honestly just feels like the author was bullied as a kid and is writing out his 'death note' so he doesn't become an actual serial killer. 100% recommend SKIP.

It's a refreshing story as the main character doesn't start off as a human player in game but a dog, hah. He's not OP as he does undergo failures in his life as a monster in the game. Romance doesn't seem to play a huge part in the story so far. It was a good read because of the translation as well, and hope it'll be picked up.

Great story... Hope the author uploads more consistently though... Also great mixture of spanish culture, chinese reincarnation story and gaming culture....

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I don't understand all the bad reviews, most of u didn't even read the story before commenting. The author himself said he is still a noob and will make some mistakes, so cut him some slack people, the author has some good idea, don't let it go to waste.

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beside, I want to change my writing style from dialogue

"We are both still in high school right?" Minjoon asked.

As expected of the energy pill the owner of the world-leading brain created to take care of her sexual urge

"Umm so I'm doing that life search thing and I can see multiple people all around us?" Sera said stepping away. "Is that bad?" She said in a nervous manner.

Meanwhile, Oliver inserted  his key to his rented room while he is here in Dubai. He rented apartment because  he know  it  took for him 3 or more months  to stayed  because  of company  problem couse by his brother.

Still, Su Han doesn't try to stop them. He could for sure stop them with his strength, but he found no point in doing so. Although there are downsides to a large group, there are also good points. The 10 new people panted while fearfully telling those originally in the store what happened on the first and second floor, which helps Su Han not need to explain.