His Bodyguard | COMPLETE - Reviews

Something is wrong with the privlage system so I'll new chapters are not able to be seen I still see the chapter count rising but maybe they don't know what is happening

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author san can i expect a god damn world devouring big ass stupidly undead army that can literally over power literally any and all opposition in the world. is the MC smart. lemme give you a 4 star review flr now.

*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism:There are a few mistakes (punctuation and capitalization) that need corrected. Also, I wish we saw a bit more of his wife (mabey in later chaps?)Positive Notes:I really liked the character and story buildup. Also, the way you did the whole reincarnation tech, just amazing. Thank you for the great story.Personal Preference:I h8 that I needed to limit myself to five chapters for now, too many books to go through to read any more. Will definitely come back to this one later, be expecting my return and please keep writing until completion.;,;. (If you don't, you will have many upset fans.;,;.)

False rating this is not a review!!         Why is it romance is that even necessary?? Like come on, is he going to kiss and f**k plants and trees??

She slowly inspected herself... The last thing she remembers was that she was already bed-ridden because of her illness and was just waiting for her imminent departure into the afterlife... But it seems that...

[It was not the demons it was us who were sealed from this world]He said.

"You could literally cut one of those things in half if you tried... Right? How is scalping it worse? They don't have bones! If they did I would have broken my hand on its skull."

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

The lighthearted conversation went on for a while, which brought the group together. A while later, when a small silence ensued, Carmine stood up and ninety degrees bowed to Ren.

My only complaints about this novel is that there isn’t more and I would also like how in these cliche stories where the mc does a 180 the girl who ignored him starts to like him just hope that doesn’t happen here as id feel bad for Austin’s friend also hoping that other dude who knew what Parkinson’s was doing get found out and suffers a horrible fate?

AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick  when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?