Hidden Marriage: Spoiled by the Imperial Commander - Reviews

I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law.............................................................................................

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It's terrible. Don't even try. Zero proof reading, incomprehensible dialogue, none of the characters have a functioning personality, and even the smut is poorly done.

You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash

i think you should introduce past life litle bit to get more connection and also you should mention the age and body height and all other things.

On the other side of the lake, things took a bit longer.

"We'll need to leave our horses here. The path up the mountain is too narrow for us to bring horses."

I got angry. I slapped him hard. "I would never!" I yelled at him. Everyone looked over at us. I stormed off leaving him speechless. But as I walked down the hall with my arms crossed I heard him yelling behind me. He was calling my name. I ignored him and continued to walk. But he soon caught up.

Yun knew the general meaning of the sentences. It was a sad but weird connection between two Worlds.

What greeted him was a waxy and pale face, blood streaming from it's mouth and bits of flesh stuck onto its teeth as it stared blankly into the sky.

Su Fei gave him a smile while clenching her fists under the table and turned to the translator to hear her sweet lies. One had to recognize that she was good! Definitely a diplomat!

"Do you know what he did to you?"