Herbs & Lotions - The Busy Life of Alfraed Logick - Reviews

generally a good book, im eager to read more and will see how far this book will carry my interest, currently its very good

I love it   and it just keep getting better

Metaphorica and action mixed in perfection! The narration was at its finest and was a game maker in this novel. I am engrossed with a variety of words and my tongue feels like a poet dancing in the words whilst playing while I read. This is phenomenal, I got to read these kinds of novels to improve my vocabulary! Kudos! Quality at its finest!

The novel is okay but the MC is quite disappointing. i was going into the novel thinking that it was going to be about a alchemy store but it is not.

The mc barely sell anything out of his store and just has the guild do it at exterme discounts that make no sense.

The author says the MC get better after chapter 50 but the story turns into a op mc going dungeon raiding for the next 50 chapter and has nothing to do with the store.

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Below is concept art of Emma the fox girl that first appeared in CHAPTER 003. Before writing, I have always liked to draw. Thus, will try to add more arts in the future.

most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.

Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.

The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.

For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her.  MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.

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The story is light, good to read, has great characters and don t have repetitive situations, I really recommend it. But I also notice that the author sometimes exaggerates in the description of scenarios and situations (he looks like an old man telling a story... he rambles!) ---------------- Author, me too I would recommend changing the cover, because despite being beautiful and well made, it gives us the idea of ​​a natural medicine book, not a fantasy book (I don't say this as a review, just because I like the novel and think it has content enough to become popular)

This is a pretty good story and has a very light and Happy undertone to it. It is basically about a very strong guy whose Trying to make his way in potion selling. The only problems I have with it are the mc is way too passive and I get that it is his character but he sucks as a salesman. He can’t Negotiate At all and just gives massive discounts at random which puts me off. And the story has some bad grammar that could be fixed buy run ing it through grammarly.

The world development in this novel is really top notch and compared to that I think the character development is a bit slow pace but hopefully it will soon get great details too. Just one thing, I would like to suggest you to not start every sentence in a new para with a 'The' I saw a lot like that and although I personally love large paras many people don't so try to include some single short sentences between the paras sometimes and use the spacing a bit better. Besides the story is going great and also I would love to see more of those character arts of yours so keep posting them too

I am giving you five stars!!! I really love this!!! The first part made me already fall in love. It is very well written and very interesting, you did a great job illustrating the scenes in the first chapter. It's proved to me that your writing is on the highest level. I salute you! And I never expect that there would be actions here, I thought this would be some mild adventure story about a doctor? OMG! I thought it was because the title and book cover is cute. Sorry about that, LOl! In any way, your skills in writing are very great and this story is the biggest proof. Adding this to my library!

The first thing that pops up when reading this book is the detailed way in which the author brings the novel to life and as someone who loves anything paranormal, It's refreshing to see such good quality. Amazing work author