Herald of the Abyss - Reviews

The story is pretty good and the plot is kind interesting. .........................................................................................,......

Since I couldn't add tags and even change/add the synopsis to my novel due to system error that have yet to be fixed, I'll be posting the tags here.#OverpowererMC#Humor#SuperHandsomeMC#Light#NoRomanceYETI'm sorry for the inconvenience this may have brought you.

I could bear with the author's grammar since english isn't his main language but there are too many mistakes in other points. Romance was very forced to the point that he was already calling the princess of the Yan Empire his future wife after they had just met in a single chapter. He doesn't act like someone who was trapped and ignored by his father for 8 years.I would continue to read the novel since I like ones with systems but there is no doubt that this novel doesn't can't even stabilize itself.

Nice read! Not too much if an info dump. Some mistakes here there, but very descriptive. Like how it fits the age of the main character. Looking forward for more.

She didn't need to do much to make him happy, he is a simple man (in his thoughts alone that is) he is happy as long his wife reciprocates his feelings, just talking, walking, little affectionate actions like holding hands and hugging make his heart swell up.

"What now?"

She wanted to look elsewhere, anywhere but him, but somehow she couldn't. At this angle, she could see the the shadows his lashes made when he lowered them over his smiling auburn orbs, unknowing of her bewitched captivation.

"You don't mind me being here, do you?"

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

not bad.                           .       .