Her Loveless Life - Reviews

I was initially interested in this novel, and I read to chapter 182. I enjoy reading slice of life system novels. However, this novel took a very weird turn.When the main character first got the system, the system told him that there wouldn't force him to do anything dangerous. However, all of a sudden there is now a life or death competition against other system holders? Wasn't this supposed to be a slice of life pet store novel? Why did it change so fast?Normally I wouldn't care all that much about this competition, but the problem is the main character literally has no reason nor motivation to participate in this. The only reason he is the owner of a pet shop is because his parents died, and so he wanted to take over. The reason the main character started capturing this mystical pets is basically, "why not?".Anyway, this story is pretty slow. The main character focuses on the mystical pets he has 100% of the time, why is kinda disappointing for a pet store owner that has 10 - 30 pets and only focusing on three of them. (So far) Normally in a story like this, you'd expect a lot of cute moments, because well, the main character owns a pet store. However, those are far and wide, nowhere to be seen. The story is extremely slow and repetitive, to the point of annoyance. However, this novel does have some good comedy. Like when the main character implied communism would be a good idea. The translation quality of this novel is pretty mid. Everything is understandable, but they randomly change the names of various characters/pets. It's extremely confusing because they literally have two different names for a character in a single chapter.Overall, the novel is decent, but the fact that the author drones on and on about random stuff really makes this novel too slow to bear. I am unsure why they put a action-plot in a slice of life novel, but whatever.

the pacing is kinda bad like i took 5to10chapters for like a week normally that's okay but the story felt supppeeeerrr slow like i felt i wasn't reading a novel but a 3hour guide to something but it only took like 5mins kinda got bored ??? but is a good story nonetheless

One of the best out here.This novel really is a hidden gem. There aren’t many novels with characters as complex and well written like this one.Give it a try and you probably won’t regret

not bad, it's a story for a specific reader..... although I must say that the economy in the world where the mc is located suffers from a serious inflation problem and the ranks of power are all mixed up, if you ignore that and are the reader to whom this type of story is directed will be able to enjoy it

i think i already read this in manhua.  .

I will give a review.  The story is pretty good.  it's good to burn time.  not too good but not too bad ... 8/10 ....sosjsbsisbsjsizbjxixbxbxizbaiaba

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Amazing!!❤️ I've read the starting and I can't wait to read what's next.The characters and everything is so beautiful designed and the idea is so fantastic! You've done a really good job. Keep it up!

HOLY SH*T..!!  Did this really came to webnovel...!!?? ☆*:.｡.o(≧▽≦)o.｡.:*☆ I'm lucky... ? ? I love this novel very much.. Thanks for coming all the way here.. ? I'm looking forward to read it one more time.. (✧ω✧)

honestly can't even get into this can't pronounce half the names the full capitalization of last names is annoying if your not going to make the first names the same it's just an overall rough read

Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast.Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American. Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record.Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled.Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live. World Background:  Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced.Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!

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