Hellish World DnD Limited Series - Reviews

Hellish World DnD Limited Series
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The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well.Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.Written at Chapter 21
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I love it, it's a good wishfullment novel. keep it up, author.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Read only few chapters so far, gotta say I'm intrigued by this, it seems like it's going to be a very thrilling story! the writing is beautiful and extra point for the good grammar only a little criticism is that introducing to many characters at the beginning could confuse other readers, but overall this is off to a good start.
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I read the first chapter because the title make me curious and now i'm obliged to wait every update. Only downside is that chapters are too short.Side note: there is no system in the story for now.
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It's sooo sad ...the book has been stopped. It's not going to be updated anymore...???Author kindly let us know...ur book was very nice n very interesting story.
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Sebelum pergi, Pak Anton telah berpesan pada pengacara dan ahli hukumnya untuk mengurus semua surat-surat penting yang diperlukan dan segala keperluan hidup kami. Pak Anton juga sempat memberikan uang tambahan untuk modal usaha ayah. Bahkan ia ingin membiayai pendidikan Helen. Niatnya sih, mau sampai Helen kuliah tapi ayah sama ibu benar-benar hampir kena serangan jantung. Melihat itu, akhirnya Pak Anton cuma bisa pasrah dengan hanya membiayai pendidikan Helen selama duduk di bangku SD saja.
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"What are we going to do brother?! If we don't find her soon, he will kill us!" one soldier said while having a worried face on him.
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"Dimana Eunna? Bukankah dia berada disini?"
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"Through the ball already!" one of the boys yelled in impatience. "Chill bro, besides you can't even catch." another said back. "Haha," the group of boys started laughing. Leon Johnson was thirteen an one of the boys, and his older brother Jerry Johnson was sixteen and loved Leon and was rather called JJ for short. Leon was very aggressive and always wanted to beat everyone. JJ was not, he was chill and sneaky. JJ was known for stealing and smoking with the older boys in the neighborhood, but always listened to Mama. "I'm the best football player in Brooklyn," Leon said strongly. "Lies!" one boys yelled. Leon got affended and shouted back "One on one then," Leon looked at him with courage on his face and smirked. The boy walked up to Leon and shoved the football to his chest and replied, "Try your best,". Leon got angry and punched other boy in the face and said, "I just did." JJ yelled "Stop!" at Leon because Leon was aggressive, and always wanted to fight someone if they said the wrong thing to him. The boys in the group all yelled "Fight, Fight!". The boy got up and tackled Leon, not noticing him Leon fell and hit his head. JJ ran to go stop the fight but by that time, he was to late, Leon was on the ground bleeding from his head. JJ first thought he had a small cut until he saw the big gash in the middle of his forehead. "Leon, look what the hell you got us into! We are in trouble again, because of you! Now you have a big ass gash on your head!" JJ said in frustration. Leon was confused and only here voices that rung in his ear. The boy that tackled Leon, name is Terry McMiller. JJ ran home to tell Mama about what happened. Three minutes passed and JJ came with Mama. Leon was bleeding all over his head that the blood dripped into his eyes and blurred his vision. Mama and JJ carried Leon home and got into the old Chevrolet Impala and headed to the nearest hospital.
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[Failure: decrease 10 affinities with everyone at the village]
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He turned around to give the boys a cheerful look, "So my promising apprentices finally used their feet, huh? I'm quite surprised they're attached!

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