Hellbound By Two Alpha's - Reviews

The story is good and I can see that author is trying to balance the fantasy and reality and I appreciate the hard work. But I think, that the story is a little slow but that is covered up by the view presented by the author. I would say,good work author and keep it up. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️?????

Great story so far.  Looking forward to more,  rated the world building at 4 because we still don't know much about it, but so far it's an amazing read with a unique view on the transmigration genre. The system, a.k.a. Lily, is great as well.  Keep up the good work!

Not good. Chapter 10 our mc has not got his power. Boring. I thought mc's brother is the real mc. I donot like this story.  I donot know what you think about it. First beast is dinosour. In my opinion it should be low grade monster not dinosour. I drop this story. Boring story.

This seems like a solid novel. I like it very much, at least i like the first 40 chapters, i hope that webnovel will continue to poblish this novel!

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"Savage? You should never talk like that to a God. Your tongue was given to praise us, and since it doesn't seem to serve the purpose, let me take it off for you." The shadow is a young man, younger than Lu Yan.

-ku, why can not you be still...

Everybody quickly ran away as they didn't wanna see as to what was about to happen. Except for some people that wanted to see something exciting.

"Hm? Is there something wrong?"

The pillow was moving, she thought  again. She jumped out of the bath and quickly looked at the pillow.

word came out about me how I saved captain America and how I was the cause of the beam of light 50 years ago people are calling me the beacon.

After reading the message, Jungkook thought to himself. What does Mr. Min wants to ask and know after all Mr.Jung is already dead. He can't do anything about this case even after meeting me. Anyway lets just meet him. Let see who he is. After-all anyone who is handing this case will either be loser, idiot or very smart.